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How to improve your English writing in 5 minutesBelow is an excerpt from Michal's story, but it is purposefully written in an ugly way. Do you find this excerpt pleasant to read?
Today , I can understand the beatles very
clearly.Each time I hear a Beatles song,I am delighted and proud becouse i
have mademy childhood dream come true. I listen to many rock bands , all in
English,and I listen every day ,sometimes forover seven hours a day.I ma
constantly aware ofmy success with english because i cna understand the
lyrics ofthe songs i listen to.and taht gives me pleasure and Satisfaction
for many hours every day .
Now you can read the original version of the excerpt. It's the same text but it's much more pleasant to read, don't you think?
Today, I can understand The Beatles very
clearly. Each time I hear a Beatles song, I am delighted and proud because I
have made my childhood dream come true. I listen to many rock bands, all in
English, and I listen every day, sometimes for over seven hours a day. I am
constantly aware of my success with English because I can understand the
lyrics of the songs I listen to. And that gives me pleasure and satisfaction
for many hours every day.
There are three kinds of typing errors in the ugly version:
Today
, I can
understand
the
beatles
very clearly.Each
time I hear a
Beatles song,I
am delighted and proud becouse
i
have mademy
childhood dream come true. I listen
to many rock bands
, all in English,and
I listen every day ,sometimes
forover
seven hours a day.I
ma
constantly aware
ofmy
success with english
because i
cna
understand
the
lyrics ofthe
songs i
listen to.and
taht
gives me
pleasure and Satisfaction
for many hours every day
.
How to avoid writing in an ugly way
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